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jprime
Title: Ex-GameWinners
Joined: Jan 27 2008
Location: Southern Ontario
Posts: 6804
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On Saturday, February 18, 2012, I made the 1989 NES game The Magic Of Scheherazade the newest addition to my retro collection.
On Sunday, February 19, 2012, I began to play it, but I stopped after completing Chapter 1 because I knew it would take too long.
On Monday, February 20, 2012, I started it up again, this time with intent to finish.
On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, I finished it.
Note carefully how I said nothing about turning it off between those last two days.
Culture Brain made a great game, to be sure, but there was a problem: It was a massive RPG, and yet, used complicated passwords instead of battery saves, basically Capcom's Willow times ten. I have long been an anti-password advocate, so I did what anyone else in my circumstances would do: I left the NES on overnight, trusting that it wouldn't crap out on me while I slept, which it indeed didn't. And now, here I am, another fresh password-free victory under my belt.
Suck it, Culture Brain! Suck it hard! I defied your pathetic password system to the bitter end! Where are ya now, bitches?!
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Klimbatize
2010 NES Champ
Title: 2011 Picnic/Death Champ
Joined: Mar 15 2010
Location: Las Vegas, NV
Posts: 4997
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Hell yeah, writing stuff down is for pussies.
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JoshWoodzy
Joined: May 22 2008
Location: Goshen, VA
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@om*d
Title: Dorakyura
Joined: Jul 10 2010
Location: Castlevania
Posts: 4226
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At least with the passwords you don't have to replace the battery when it dies.
Also, this could have gone in the video game achievements thread.
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JoshWoodzy
Joined: May 22 2008
Location: Goshen, VA
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It also has a vague title that is against the rules.
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@om*d
Title: Dorakyura
Joined: Jul 10 2010
Location: Castlevania
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| JoshWoodzy wrote: |
| It also has a vague title that is against the rules. |
Yeah, I suppose it does. I expected his story to end with, "and then I raped my dog and ate my own balls" or something that was actually insane. Then the title would have fit.
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Klimbatize
2010 NES Champ
Title: 2011 Picnic/Death Champ
Joined: Mar 15 2010
Location: Las Vegas, NV
Posts: 4997
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Some typos:
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| On Saturday, February 18, 2012, I made the 1989 NES game The Magic Of Scheherazade the newest addition to my retro collection. |
Titles of video games should be either italicized or underlined, though italics tend to be the standard.
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| On Sunday, February 19, 2012, I began to play it, but I stopped after completing Chapter 1 because I knew it would take too long. |
This is a run-on sentence and really should be divided into two separate sentences to be grammatically correct.
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| On Monday, February 20, 2012, I started it up again, this time with intent to finish. |
This is another run-on sentence that could be fixed with a conjunction.
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| Culture Brain made a great game, to be sure, but there was a problem: It was a massive RPG, and yet, used complicated passwords instead of battery saves, basically Capcom's Willow times ten. |
"It" should not be capitalized. This sentence is also a run-on, and again there is the issue with the video game title.
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| I have long been an anti-password advocate, so I did what anyone else in my circumstances would do: I left the NES on overnight, trusting that it wouldn't crap out on me while I slept, which it indeed didn't. |
This is yet another example of too many clauses jammed together without proper conjunctions.
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| Where are ya now, bitches?! |
There is nothing really wrong here, though I think an interrobang would have been awesome.
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LeshLush
Joined: Oct 19 2009
Location: Nashville, TN
Posts: 1479
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Back in high school, one of the bands I played in was briefly called Interrobang.
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username
Title: owner of a lonely heart
Joined: Jul 06 2007
Location: phoenix, az usa
Posts: 16127
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| Klimbatize wrote: |
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hahahaha well played
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| JoshWoodzy wrote: |
| It also has a vague title that is against the rules. |
Yeah, I suppose it does. I expected his story to end with, "and then I raped my dog and ate my own balls" or something that was actually insane. Then the title would have fit. |
all his threads have really vague titles. doesnt ever learn
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| I'll eat a turkey sandwich while blowing my load |
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