wow, alotta typos in the new AYAOTD article!

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and an evil nurses that wasn't really evil

Unless there was more than one nurse, in that case remove the "an"

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so he asks Tucker and the rest of the current Midnight society to help him

add 'the"

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The boys go back to Gary's dorm room to meet with the others and get progress reports

again, add "the"

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He was the star quarterback, until he broke his leg

there should be a space after the comma

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Donna broke up with him while he was in the hospital

yet another "the"

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Vince reveals that he keeps it around his neck

instead of "around him neck"

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and all sorts of other treasures they would able to salvage when the house was taken away

shouldn't that be "and all sorts of other treasures they salvaged when the house was taken away"?

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and Mr. Gregory throws her out of their home

because "the" would seem odd...

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saying that the Silver Sight destroyed his mother and scoffing at her plan to destroy it

"the" again

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The episode concludes with the Gregory family in possession of four of the five record pieces.

don't you mean "Midnight Society"?

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Bob tells that them that his brother was the world's youngest amusement park owner

remove the extra "that"

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When Andy and Vange show up at the old McGorrill residence

instead of "resident"

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It's a message from Bruce

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So the kids all head off to the amusement park and retrieve the Silver Sight

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The mysterious boy whom everyone except Gary had already seen appears and congratulates them

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She discovers out that Ellen isn't actually enrolled at their school

remove "out"

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She tells him he needs to toss the crystals into the center of the guns

add "him", or alternatively, change "tells" to "says"

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and his dad stops being a total assholes long enough to tell her that Kevin never came home

add "a", remove "s"

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they discover that the piece was down by an artist named Vivian White

I'm sure you meant "made"

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but Henry confirms that the Maiden is alone

instead of "along"

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Justin runs into Tony

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The car begins playing 60s surf rock and they end up at a brand new diner standing in what they thought was an abandoned lot

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In 1969, Bulldog pissed the trucker off and the two dead boys raced him towards a narrow bridge on Highway 13. Tony was too chicken to floor it, and so he stayed even with trucker.

this is just worded kind of oddly...

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Since Peter still has the potion, so the zombie is most directly interested in him.

either remove "Since" or "so"

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she puts him in the middle of the street outside it

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Inside, he sees a picture of the boy from the photograph

instead of "seems"

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since it's better then having their lifeforce slowly sucked out

instead of "slowing"

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the photographer is so impressed with her skin that he awards her the magazine cover

isn't that something an executive would do? (not that it has anything to do with the typo, it's just an observation)

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they willingly accept the numbers Visage assigns them in place of names and live as her slaves.

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They keep seeing ghostly scenes of the birthday of Emily Jerome

and finally, we end with another missing "the"!

Still, a great article all around. Makes me wish I had actually watched the show as a kid....

It's no biggie. Hell, I'm surprised(and happy) you even posted one today!

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