That... was short for an article, yeah. It felt more like one of those gamefaqs' short reviews. But then again, for a review to be longer, you would need to either throw in a few jokes and pictures, or do a written LP of sorts.
Even if you choose to go the non-joke way (and, why would you do that jokes are the best
), you should still consider more visual aids, specially if you're gonna focus on how good the game looks, and how stylish the graphics are.
Lastly, you say it's a review, but it feels more like a conversation you would have around the water cooler with someone who has already played the game. You throw a lot of names at the reader without elaborating further, and that will only annoy people who haven't played it.
And double lastly (
), it takes a while to develop a writing style, so keep at it
