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Tebor
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Batman article
"I've decided to eat it with milk, because if I've got to this then I'm gonna do it right."
Should be: "... if I've got to do this then I'm gonna do it right." although the use of 'gonna' is debatable in the "correct grammar" department.
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Tebor
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FWSE 38
"There are no clouds that koopas." should be "There are no clouds that throw koopas."
Ted Kennedy is WORSE THAN HITLER!
"So let me explain to you why Ted Kennedy is an terrible son of a bitch" an = a
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Syd Lexia
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One again, thank you for your help. Accidentally leaving out a word seems to be a weakness of mine.
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B.B.King
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| One again, thank you for your help. Accidentally leaving out a word seems to be a weakness of mine. |
should be Once again,thank you for your help. Accidentally leaving out a word seems to be a weakness of mine.
 im an asshole.
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Syd Lexia
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Hey, it was like 6 AM, cut me some slack. 
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Tebor
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Monster Party Review
Page One
When your sight finally clearly... - I think clearly = clears
Page Two
To beat him, you must the little red ball above his mouth when it's vulnerable.
Word is missing so now I'm stuck on the boss... damn it!
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Syd Lexia
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Syd Lexia
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Um... uh-oh. I saw your post Tebor and I did fix the problems. Unfortunately when I was replying to it, I hit edit instead of quote and ended up changing your post instead of replying to it. I couldn't change it back, so I deleted it.
But the second sentence had a few others problems too.
It should have said "A rather interesting..." and "seen IT done"
I broke it into two sentences since it was little awkward. The lesson is that administrative powers are bad when you're tired.
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Tebor
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Don't worry about and the new double sentence ROCKS!
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OctoMan
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Birthday article:
'One of most' should be 'One of the most'
'after collecting all screenshots' should (I think) be 'after collecting all the screenshots'
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Syd Lexia
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You're right on both counts. Phixxxed.
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Syd Lexia
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Oops. It should read:
Plus, I'm pretty. She was sporting camel toe a few times.
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DrBoron
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"Chances are pretty good, that it's either Sylvester or Tom"
Correction: <remove comma>
"I don't know how this cartoon fared, but I've fucking seen it"
Possible correction: "I've never fucking seen it"
"When certain called for it, Heathcliff was willing"
Possible correction: ""When certain situations called"
"His is Spike's owner"
Correction: "He is Spike's owner"
"Riff Raff's exploits were slightly interesting than Heathcliff's."
Possible correction: "slightly less interesting"
(PS: Great article. Hurray updates!)
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Syd Lexia
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Syd Lexia
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FUCK.
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Tebor
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More Heathcliff fun:
...but I didn't need to Heathcliff to figure out that leaving my pet outside in bad weather was cruel.
I think a "have" should be in there somewhere or one less "to" or something.
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Syd Lexia
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Tebor
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10 Best X-Mas Movies
Booger from Revenge of the Nerds is in it
But it's difficult to the believe that's the case.
But Rambo is highly skilled soldier, and he manages to escape.
Tim Burton managed to the impossible:
you get to see Kevin Spacey before The Usual Suspects came out and every started sucking his dick and saying he was a great actor.
Secondly, it's fun to movie to show to your little cousin.
you can just pop this movie in and let it works its magic.
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Tebor
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Animals Christmas Eve:
You know, somewhere that people have heard of. Christ.
FWSE
... I’m pretty sure the first thing he’ll do put Holland back underwater.
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Tebor
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Gay K K
"it becomes quite clear the game is quite not over. " shouldn't it be "not quite over."?
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Syd Lexia
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Gay K K
"it becomes quite clear the game is quite not over. " shouldn't it be "not quite over."? |
The first one isn't so much a typo as it is a bad attempt at a pun, but the second one is fixed.
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