Good stuff. I really liked Crystalis when I played it a long time ago. Never beat it, though. Got stuck at some point late game, then never went back to it.
Some typos/ weird wording:
"because I owned most of bona fide classics"
"a magicall all-healing inn"
"wouldn't fucking shut about it"
" who runs pasts every enemy"
"The Rabbit Boots allow your character to jump, but like every."
"His name is Akahana, he's merchant,"
"what was up onthat mountain"
And, yeah, the 'bears' are totally tigers.