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i'll_bite_your_ear
Title: Distillatoria
Joined: Jun 09 2010
Location: van down by the river
PostPosted: Feb 14 2013 10:44 pm Reply with quote Back to top

I've been writing for about 10 years now, on and off. Maybe you guys like some of my stuff and i would like to hear your oppinion about them. Here are some recent lyrics of mine:

Cynical Condition

The sun goes down
when it comes up
it goes away
what you have got
could not have more
than what i have not
when you say hello
i wait for goodbye
i see not you
looking in your eyes
it's a distguise
your funny smile
it is for real
when you shed a tear
the cat goes round
and round and round
it comes a round
and makes not sound
i can not hear
your lucky heart
this is the reason
why we part
it is me
that fails to see
it is you
that fails to show
so what to do
what should i care
if you are here
or you are not there
it takes a shrug
to make you see
who far apart
we are always be


_____________________________________



Scary is the mind (not the world)

When Dracula did rise
to greet the wolfman
the creature of the black lagoon
was laughing

The Golem takes a leap
a leap of fate for justice
not trusting
the frankenstein syndrom

And with the mummy
in the garden
the warden
was singing
a hymne for the red dead moon

Ghosts and the haunted house
are best mates
trading the fear for logic
for their own sake
while the spiders and the snakes
are dancing
are romancing
underneath the read dead moon

And while satan was trying
to defy the laws of god
he was weeping an honest tear
cause moving the undead
the legions of dread
takes a lot
and more, that's for sure

and what was it
that was defining
your anxietys
was it the word
or the bird
that flew
through your mind

was it the stutter of a stranger
the wrath of a ranger
or the mind that was defining both
take a laugh
at the limping
that greets you with an angry grin
knowing that you and him
are both the same

It's the right
that does wrong
it is the beauty
that hits strong
on ugliness
for so so long
it's the moral that breaks
the sinners heart in ache
like the morning sun
negates the night


___________________________


Billy the Bat

Street lights
city's asleep right?
liquor store heist
jazz music and sweet lies
Billy Bat cries
because his girl did leave last night

And the radio, doesn't care
nor the angels in the bible
billy the bat has to fly on his own
through depression and the absencene of meaning
screaming, gleaming city lights and neon signs


Sweet Crimes
Miniskirts flirting at midnight
bowling alley heist
Money and denial
the Anchorman sighs
and Billy bat too
cause he seems to get over you

Well the radio still doesn't care
nor the angels in the bibel
Billy the Bat has to fly alone
through heartaches and hardships
screaming, gleaming city lights and neon signs

These times
the mafia will rise
super market heist
the city girls start cryin
billy bats eyes
open from ages of denial


________________________________________


The Tower of Dreams

He will come he will come
not just for some
for one that is like me
no for me yes for me
Not blonde curly locks
not for waists that invite
to the lovers desire, the fire
o why
do i sit here
and drown in my tears
while imagining paradise
far away, yes for years
i been yearning
been hiding, oh here
in this tower of dreams
my heart oh it steams
it will burst and it screams
dreams dreams oh dreams
that will not complete
the end is defeat
how fragile my needs
desires that bleed
oh silence, my lover
oh silence, my heart
silence please silence please silence please..
Oh ocean of woe
ocean of dreams
the ocean it calls me
and though i know
it waves call defeat
i have to got down
down to the water
and wait for my lover
and bother
and wait
and in my dream he is there
with wind in his hair
and with flowers adorned
oh passion, oh feel
never stop
and become real
and this tower of dreams
in this idle hour
in this cage i got placed in
my face, it tell of centuries
of unfulfilled desires
my lover
my dream
become real
i will defend this vision
till i end

__________________________________

What's falling out your bookshelf?

Can you be?
the girl of my dreams
sitting all alone
on her throne
made out of rubbish

Are you asking for more?
Yes, that is what you do!
You are good for me
and i'am good for you
Oh you read books a lot?
And you like complicated words?
those troglodytes are not of much worth
I agree
do you see?
a feelings coming to me
is it coming to you?
is it true, is it true?!

Oh, you complain a lot
your seats always to hard and uncomfortable?
well anyways
change is the only thing that is stable
i don't wanna sound pretentious, excuse moi
it's a habit not more, a habit of going to far
well i guess you are ok
you said you wanna stay?
alright
yippee yeah
You thinking of something to say?
thats so cute
can't get enough
make me rough
and unstable
i'm willing
i will learn
i'am able
You like it that way?
well ok, let me breath
and come down, well you see
you are perfect for me
and vice versa
don't flee
a thought is coming to me
to mind to be definite
a wish that ignites every humans heart:

"forever and ever
and never apart"

_________________________________

Your oppinion on them is appreciated.


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Title: Dorakyura
Joined: Jul 10 2010
Location: Castlevania
PostPosted: Feb 14 2013 11:31 pm Reply with quote Back to top

I liked Scary is the mind (not the world) and Billy the Bat. I will say that without the music, sometimes lyrics are hard to give opinions on. As someone who also writes lyrics and poetry, my best advice is to keep writing and keep challenging yourself in any way you can. Having access to stuff like a dictionary or thesaurus and writing about stuff you would not normally want to write about is a good start.


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i'll_bite_your_ear
Title: Distillatoria
Joined: Jun 09 2010
Location: van down by the river
PostPosted: Feb 15 2013 11:42 am Reply with quote Back to top

It's completely random wich topic i write about. I'm very open minded when it comes to lyrics, so all i do is to let it happen. You know, my inspiration steadly comes and goes and when it comes (wich happens always when i feel in touch with something i like) it just put it on the paper. I'm also a very fast writer. It only takes me 5 minutes or so to write a song or a poem or whatever.


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it was the blurst of times
 
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