But since we have to travel far
We will need to buy a car
So we'll pick cotton for three months
On the land they took from us


      Challenge #3: Can you find three places where paste was applied to the back of the picture?

      Thoughts: This is one the my least favorite pages in the book for a few reasons. First of all, it features a rather generic picture of cotton fields. Secondly, it has way too many aesthetic problems. There are two lines starting with lower case letters as well as some questionable punctuation. The first line ends in a comma, and while that isn't technically wrong, it isn't consistent with the rest of the story up to this point. Then we have yet another period. Either every complete sentence should end with a period or none of them should, but I seem to keep going back and forth. Also, the number 3 should be written out as a word. I can't look at this page anymore, so let's move on.

 

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